Pub Scene: I received very positive feedback on this sequence from the rest of my group and from other members of my year group, especially the boys. My male target audience immediately picked up on what i was trying to achieve: male bonding and boasting over the subject of female conquests. Two aspects in particular were singled out for praise: the realistic mise-en-scene of the pub environment, props like beer and the warm cosy atmosphere and that encouraged the "boys will be boys" atmosphere. The use of visual codes such as the symmetry of the chairs, boys and glasses was also noted. this functions as a device to show how much in tune the boys are in their attitudes to girls and equally importantly as a visual bridge and match cut to the next scene which opens with 2 cocktail glasses.
Restaurant Scene: I have highlighted 3 key areas from this scene on which I have received feedback. There was positive feedback about the shots I used including the shot reverse shot. However, feedback highlighted areas of fuzzy focus and how shooting into the light could make facial expressions harder to read.
Cinema Scene:
Text Scene: Originally,
I tried to make the the texts come up on the screen in an imessage
style. However, when doing this because i was adding layers over the
original video which affected the colour of the original image.
Therefore, instead of using the imessage bubbles I opted for text on the screen. This allowed the colour of the film to remain the same and still allow the message of the text to be passed onto the viewer.
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